Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please take a look at my sentences and correct my grammar and punctuation?
David thought about what he was doing in this godforsaken town where he did not have either family or friends, and where most of the time he suffered from boredom. If he stayed a few more years, he would probably develop an incurable illness, which would shorten his life.
David thought about what he was doing in this godforsaken town where he did not have either family or friends, and where most of the time he suffered from boredom. If he stayed a few more years, he would probably develop an incurable illness, which would shorten his life.