Dear Admissions Committee of xxx

[aymanemsi3]

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Subject: english proficiency



Dear Admissions Committee of xxx,



With reference to the above subject, I would like to enclose a copy of my grades in Business English:

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Third year of master’s degree in financial engineering​	Business English 1	17,6​
Business English 2	17,6​
Fourth year of master’s degree in financial engineering​	Business English 3	12,8​
Business English 4	16,2​

the entire transcript is uploaded

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I have also enclosed a letter of recommendation written by the English teacher which has been signed and approved by the school administration.

I would like to ask your kindness to look with a positive eye to my request and grant me the chance to join your organization that is part of my professional dream.



Faithfully yours,

 

[Tarheel]

Subject: English Proficiency (That should be your title.)

Two things. One, is this an application to a school of some sort? Two, I am not sure I understand the last paragraph. Are you asking them to look favorably upon your application? (I think it's pretty much taken for granted that you want that.)