[Grammar] Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

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For most patients, application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle leads to relieve symptoms without need for any additional therapy.
 
For most patients, the application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle [STRIKE]leads[/STRIKE] helps to relieve symptoms without the need for any additional therapy.
 
In addition to tedmc's suggestions above, I would say "their/the menstrual cycle."
 
I would say "tends" (to relieve symptoms) instead of "helps" (to relieve symptoms).
 
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