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[meela]

Please advise if it is correct or not.

The scanned letter which was received to us on 12th March in your email as an attachment. We took the print out the scanned letter & Rs. 10,000/- put into an envelope and delivered to Mr Raju.

Thanks

 

[emsr2d2]

Please advise if it is correct or not.

The scanned letter which was received to us on 12th March in your email as an attachment.
We received your email of 12th March and the scanned letter which was attached.

We took the print out the scanned letter & Rs. 10,000/- put into an envelope and delivered to Mr Raju.
We printed the scanned letter, put it in an envelope with Rs 10,000/- and delivered the envelope to Mr Raju.

Thanks.

No, yours was not correct. See above. I have rewritten both sentences. Please check to see if they match what you wanted to say.

Your first sentence is not a full sentence. "Received to us" is also incorrect.
Your second sentence is missing at least one preposition and some punctuation.