Maybo
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I have chosen a IELTS practice speaking topic and written a paragraph about it. Please check them and correct any mistakes.
Topic: Describe an exciting experience you’ve had.
I once had an exciting experience in Berlin. I remember it happened in a place near walls of graffiti and I was heading to a museum. As I walked, I suddenly noticed that a large piece of dark cloud approaching me. It was very interesting to see the sky was divided into blue and grey so clearly because where I live are full of skyscrapers and they block my vision most of the time. As the cloud kept moving forward, it started to rain. I then ran quickly as if there was a tornado and tried to outpace it. It would be fun if I could get to the museum before got into the raining zone. Of course, I failed. My shoes all got wet. The cloud outpaced me quickly. But I was amazed by the view I saw; I was walking in the sun while able to see the heavy rain kept moving in front of me.
Topic: Describe an exciting experience you’ve had.
I once had an exciting experience in Berlin. I remember it happened in a place near walls of graffiti and I was heading to a museum. As I walked, I suddenly noticed that a large piece of dark cloud approaching me. It was very interesting to see the sky was divided into blue and grey so clearly because where I live are full of skyscrapers and they block my vision most of the time. As the cloud kept moving forward, it started to rain. I then ran quickly as if there was a tornado and tried to outpace it. It would be fun if I could get to the museum before got into the raining zone. Of course, I failed. My shoes all got wet. The cloud outpaced me quickly. But I was amazed by the view I saw; I was walking in the sun while able to see the heavy rain kept moving in front of me.