Diary entry - Yesterday, the electricity of our building suspended for hours

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Yesterday, the electricity of our building suspended for hours so I chose to read a book. I found it very hard to concentrate because I kept checking my phone for no reason. No one sent messages to me and no notifications. I think I've already addicted to the internet.
 

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Yesterday, the electricity supply [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] to our building was suspended for [one/two/several] hours so I chose to read a book. I found it very hard to concentrate because I kept checking my phone for no reason. No one sent me any messages [STRIKE]to me[/STRIKE] and I had no notifications. I think [STRIKE]I've[/STRIKE] I'm [STRIKE]already[/STRIKE] addicted to the internet.

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