Diary - I decided not to eat fish anymore because fish bones

Maybo

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This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I decided not to eat fish anymore because fish bones are difficult to be picked out and stuck in the throat easily. I just had fish for my dinner. I feel like I have a fish bone in my throat, or it hurt my throat when I ate the meat and now just my wound hurts. If my throat still feels strange tomorrow, I will go to see a doctor.
 

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I just had fish for my dinner. I feel like I have a fish bone in my throat, or it like I somehow hurt my throat when I ate the meat swallowed. and now just my wound hurts. If my throat still feels strange tomorrow, I will go to see a doctor.

I've decided not to eat fish anymore because fish bones are difficult to be picked pick out and they get stuck in the throat easily.
See above. I've changed the order of the sentences because your original said, in short, "I've decided to give up fish. I had fish for dinner".
 
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