Diary - I hadn't had a nightmare until last night.

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I hadn't had a nightmare until last night. I guess it was because I watched a horror movie yesterday morning. The nightmare was about toilets. Everyone was waiting to use the toilet, and some said there were ghosts in particular stalls. Why didn't I dream about delicious food or travelling around the world? I've been watching shows about that.

 

[emsr2d2]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I hadn't had never had a nightmare until last night. I guess it was because I watched a horror movie yesterday morning. The nightmare was about toilets. Everyone was waiting to use the toilet, and some said there were ghosts in particular stalls. Why didn't I dream about delicious food or travelling around the world? I've been watching shows about that those.

See above. Using "I had never had" is a bit more emphatic.

(Most people don't watch horror films in the mornings! How unusual!)

 

[Maybo]

(Most people don't watch horror films in the mornings! How unusual!)

It’s because horror films don’t seem very scary to me in the morning.

 

[emsr2d2]

It’s because horror films don’t seem very scary to me in the morning.

Well, if that one gave you nightmares many hours later, I think you've disproved that theory!