Diary - I just read an article about a food dyed

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I just read an article about a food dyed which can make mice's skin partially transparent. The scientists now can see mice's organs with their bare eyes! I wonder if there are any substances can make humans' skin see-through temporarily too. In the future maybe people are able to check on their organs by themselves.

 

[emsr2d2]

I just read an article about a food dyed which can make mice's skin partially transparent. The scientists now can see mice's organs with their bare eyes! I wonder if there are any substances can make humans' skin see-through temporarily too. In the future maybe people are able to check on their organs by themselves.

First, fix the two basic errors that I've underlined above.

 

[Maybo]

Revised:
I just read an article about a food dye which can make mice's skin partially transparent. The scientists now can see mice's organs with their bare eyes! I wonder if there are any substances that can make humans' skin see-through temporarily too. In the future maybe people will be able to check on their organs by themselves.

 

[Rover_KE]

with their bare eyes with the naked eye