Diary - I went to a library this afternoon

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

I went to a library this afternoon. Upon arrival, I felt very thirty so I wanted to buy some drinks, but I only saw sugary and caffeinated beverages. I wondered why they didn't have any water to sell. Then, I looked around and discovered water dispensers but there were no cups. I guess maybe they want to encourage visitors to bring their own bottle.

 

[Tarheel]

I guess you mean "thirsty" (not "thirty").

Put an "s" on the end of "bottle".

It's been my experience that if you ask for water they'll just give you some. (That doesn't apply, I think, to places where they sell water.)