Different sentence to express my point of view. Please check and let me if you have any notes.

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1)The Arabic language can cope with the huge amount of new terms that flows in all scientific fields.

2)Malnutrition is the inadequate, excessive or unbalanced consumption of food items or ingredients.
3)King Mohammed VI is expected to deliver a speech shortly afterwards, which described as a historic speech at the African Union Summit held yesterday.
4)Multicultural studies are a discipline in anthropology that use field data from many communities to examine the field of human behavior.
5)Definitions of adulthood are often conflicting and contradictory, and a biological adult with adult behavior, but he or she still treats like children if he or she is under the legal age of majority.
 

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1. Languages don't cope. That is not something languages do. It's the people who use those languages who act. (Languages are tools of communication.)

Here's your new thread title: Arabic.
 

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2. Malnutrition is the result of not getting enough of the right kind of food.
 

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1. Languages don't cope. That is not something languages do. It's the people who use those languages who act. (Languages are tools of communication.)

Here's your new thread title: Arabic.
Can you please clarify what do you mean?
 

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2. Malnutrition is the result of not getting enough of the right kind of food.
Yes, can you please to check and correct any grammatical issues for the above sentences.
 

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There are too many issues and too many sentences to deal with in one thread, Mona. Please ask about one sentence at a time.
 

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3. The tenses are messed up in that one.
4. The goal of any field of study should be to teach us things.
5. That's totally screwed up and needs to be entirely rewritten.
 
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