Does this sentence sounds good?

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backspace2062

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The company should collect CVs' of unemployed people going there for seeking job to make a data base.
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The company should make a data base of the CVs of job-seekers.

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A better title would have been '
The company should collect CVs'.

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'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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Note that "database" is one word.
 
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