Does this sound natural?

[drop90]

Sorry if the tittle is wrong, I didnt know what else to put.

A conversation between me and my teacher

"Teacher: Drop90, what happened? why did you miss last class?

Drop90: I missed because when I was leaving the appartment, one of the main pipings broke and the water started to leak out strongly. The stairs turned into a river and the appartments were filling up with the water. It took about 1 hour for the cleaning man to shut down the valve and for us another hour to clean up the mess."


Any unnatural phrase? mistake? something hard to listen?

 

[tedmc]

Sorry if the[STRIKE] tittle[/STRIKE] title is wrong, I didn't know what else to put.

A conversation between me and my teach (You should have used this as the title of your thread)

"Teacher: Drop90, what happened? Why did you miss the last class?

Drop90: I missed the class because when I was leaving the [STRIKE]appartment[/STRIKE] apartment, one of the main [STRIKE]pipings[/STRIKE] pipes broke and[STRIKE] the[/STRIKE] a lot of water started to leak out [STRIKE]strongly[/STRIKE]. The stairs[STRIKE] turned into a river[/STRIKE] were flooded and the [STRIKE]appartments[/STRIKE] apartment [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] was [STRIKE]filling up[/STRIKE] filled with[STRIKE] the [/STRIKE]water. It took about 1 hour for the [STRIKE]cleaning[/STRIKE] maintenance man to shut down the valve and[STRIKE] for us[/STRIKE] another hour for us to clean up the mess."


[STRIKE]Any unnatural phrase? mistake? something hard to listen?[/STRIKE]

.

 

[Matthew Wai]

Sorry if the[STRIKE] tittle[/STRIKE] title is wrong, I didn't know what else to put.

A comma splice.

 

[emsr2d2]

Titles should include some relevant words from the parts of your post that you are unsure about. A good title for this would have been "Teacher: "Drop90, what happened?"