alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Emily kept walking until she reached a vast expanse of barren land, dotted with a few weeds. She sat on the ground with her knees bent and legs to one side. She felt as if the emptiness inside her merged with the emptiness of the desolate land.
Emily kept walking until she reached a vast expanse of barren land, dotted with a few weeds. She sat on the ground with her knees bent and legs to one side. She felt as if the emptiness inside her merged with the emptiness of the desolate land.