[Vocabulary] Exhibition Description

[Grincat]

Dear forumers,
could you please check a few lines (grammar, capitalization, etc.) from my English version of an art project description (plate on a wall):
(source language — Russian) Thank you!

Subway, 2013

An "Akt" art-group project

The project implemented in cooperation with Ivan Petrov

We wish to thank for support: Syktyvkar City Administration,
Homeowners Association "Lenina 89", "ShouTekhnik" company

We would also like to personally thank:
Oleg Azarov, Tatyana Vlasyeva, Nikolay Gabov

 

[MikeNewYork]

Dear forumers,
could you please check a few lines (grammar, capitalization, etc.) from my English version of an art project description (plate on a wall):
(source language — Russian) Thank you!

Subway, 2013

An "Akt" art-group project

The project implemented in cooperation with Ivan Petrov

We wish to thank for support: Syktyvkar City Administration,
Homeowners Association "Lenina 89", "ShouTekhnik" company

We would also like to personally thank:
Oleg Azarov, Tatyana Vlasyeva, Nikolay Gabov

The description seems fine. I would remove the "The" before "project" in the 3rd line (and then capitalize the "P" in project).

 

[Grincat]

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much!

I have posted another question concerning this project: Art Project Description

If you have some spare time, could you please also take a look at that thread too.

TNX again!