newkeenlearner
Senior Member
- Joined
- Apr 12, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Pashto, Pushto
- Home Country
- Afghanistan
- Current Location
- United States
Hi,
Could anyone check this context for any mistakes? I have rewritten in many time and made some changes. However, I am not sure if it is OK or not.
"Family vacations were a high point in my childhood because my parents usually planned on taking a holiday twice a year.
We also used to go to the seaside almost most weekends as we owned a beautiful home vacation by the sea and we could go to the beach everyday.
It was in North of Iran where we usually spend our holidays because it was and still is one of the most popular vacation spots in Iran where a lot of people enjoyed spending time around the beach, strolling along the shore, lying and sunbathing on the beach."
Thanks so much.
Could anyone check this context for any mistakes? I have rewritten in many time and made some changes. However, I am not sure if it is OK or not.
"Family vacations were a high point in my childhood because my parents usually planned on taking a holiday twice a year.
We also used to go to the seaside almost most weekends as we owned a beautiful home vacation by the sea and we could go to the beach everyday.
It was in North of Iran where we usually spend our holidays because it was and still is one of the most popular vacation spots in Iran where a lot of people enjoyed spending time around the beach, strolling along the shore, lying and sunbathing on the beach."
Thanks so much.