hairstylist cut my hair...

[Polyester]

As following sentence is correctly using with grammar?

I went to hair salon to cut my hair. When I sat on the seat my hairstylist asked me what's style today?
I told him/her I want to fresh cut or depend on my head and hair style, please give me advice...

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

Are the following sentences grammatically written?

And:

I went to a hair salon to get my hair cut.

And:

After I sat in the barber chair the hair stylist asked me how I wanted my hair cut.

I couldn't understand the rest well enough to be able to make any suggestions.

 

[Polyester]

The rest of part is telling you the hairstylist help me to make a decision.
However, maybe i described it unclear on this way.

 

[Tarheel]

Say:

I asked the hairstylist for advice on how to get my hair cut.

If hair salons there are like they are here then they have pictures on the walls showing various hair styles.

 

[emsr2d2]

The rest of [STRIKE]part[/STRIKE] the post is [STRIKE]telling[/STRIKE] to explain to you that the hairstylist helped me to make a decision.
However, maybe I [strike]described[/strike] did not explain/write it [STRIKE]unclear[/STRIKE] clearly. [STRIKE]on this way.[/STRIKE]

Note my corrections above. I think you are trying to write sentences that are too difficult for your level of English. Unfortunately, you make a lot of errors. I think you should concentrate on simpler sentences until you have mastered the basics.

 

[Polyester]

Note my corrections above. I think you are trying to write sentences that are too difficult for your level of English. Unfortunately, you make a lot of errors. I think you should concentrate on simpler sentences until you have mastered the basics.

I think I can write it well until I'm getting old. I will try my best...

 

[Raymott]

I think I can write it well until I'm getting old. I will try my best...

Well, that sentence isn't the success you probably hoped it would be! What does it mean?
Do you mean, "I will probably be getting old before I can write it well"?
"I think I will be able to write it well when I'm getting old."

 

[Polyester]

Well, that sentence isn't the success you probably hoped it would be! What does it mean?
Do you mean, "I will probably be getting old before I can write it well"?

You are correct, Raymott.
I wrote each sentence by translating from Chinese to English. I didn't know i wrote a error sentence.

 

[GoesStation]

I think you meant I think I will be able to write well before I get old. Does that look right?

 

[Raymott]

I wrote each sentence by translating from Chinese to English. I didn't know i wrote a error sentence.

Well, that's a good method to write an erroneous sentence.

 

[tedmc]

I told him/her I want to fresh cut or depend on my head and hair style, please give me advice...

I told my hairstylist that I wanted a new hairstyle and asked him/her to recommend styles that suit me.

 

[Rover_KE]

Polyester, click here to access the Other Languages forum.

You can post the Chinese text there, along with your attempt at translating it.

I'm sure our other knowledgable Chinese members will be happy to help.