I prefer the last version.'(Insert quote) he said with surprise/[STRIKE]in surprise/surpsisedly[/STRIKE]'.
Which is better? Or should I write 'he said, surprised'?[no space before the question mark]
That would be my second preference. My first would be "with a surprise".I prefer the last version.
Really? That doesn't look at all natural to me. Did you mean "with a surprised look"?That would be my second preference. My first would be "with a surprise".
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