He waited until the glass was full of water then turned of the faucet.

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He waited until the glass was full of water then turned off the faucet. Turning around, he started for Jane's room when his shin hit the half-open door of the dish-washing machine. Kevin tripped over and sprawled on the floor, and the glass of water in his hand dropped and smashed onto the ceramic. It shattered to smithereens, scattering shards of glass, and water over the floor. He heard Jane's footsteps running towards him after hearing the sounds of glass breaking. She muffled a scream, covering her mouth. "What the hell happened here? Are you okay?"

Kevin felt the sting of a pain in his leg and was startled to see blood trickling down the floor. "Why did you agree to go out with such a clumsy slob, Jane?" he said.

 

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He waited until the glass was full of water Kevin filled the glass then turned off the faucet. Turning around, he started for Jane's room when but his shin hit the half-open door of the dish-washing machine dishwasher. Kevin He tripped over and sprawled on the floor, and the glass of water in his hand dropped dropping and smashed smashing onto on the ceramic. It shattered to smithereens, scattering water and shards of glass , and water all over the floor. He heard Jane's footsteps running towards him after hearing she'd heard the sounds sound of breaking glass. breaking. She covered her mouth, muffling a scream. covering her mouth. "What the hell happened here? Are you okay?"

Kevin felt the sting of a pain in his leg and was startled to see blood trickling down to the floor. "Why did you agree to go out with such a clumsy slob, Jane?" he said.