Home is nowhere but in this Universe

[iamtime]

Hi,

again, I want to make this something sounds poetic and philosophical - which one is my correct English?

1.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home.

2.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, is home.

3.
Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe, it is home.

Which one makes sense and sounds better to you more?

Thanks.

 

[5jj]

1. Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home. Fine

2. Home is nowhere but in this Universe; [STRIKE]it is[/STRIKE] here, at this point, is home.

3. Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe; [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE]this is home.

That's what I think, but I'm not very poetic.

 

[birdeen's call]

I like the first one.

 

[Rover_KE]

You don't need to capitalise universe.

 

[iamtime]

You don't need to capitalise universe.

Got it. Thanks you, Rover :-D