[General] Hotel Question Email

zecaloteiro

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Hi,


I need to ask to the hotel I'm going to stay if they could hold some purchase for me until I arrive.
Then I wrote this email to send them.


Subject: Information
Message:
Hi,

My name is Rafael.
I have a 2 days reservation for 18th October 17.
I'm wondering if I receive a parcel about 3 days before my arriving could you hold it to me until my check in...


Is it possible?
Thank you.

Br,
Rafael


Is this correct?
Could the hotel understand my request?


Thanks ;)
 
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emsr2d2

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Hi,

I need to ask to the hotel I'm going to stay in/at if they could hold [STRIKE]some[/STRIKE] a purchase for me until I arrive (no full stop here) [STRIKE]Then[/STRIKE] so I wrote this email to send them.


Subject: [STRIKE]Information[/STRIKE] A request
Message:
Hi,

My name is Rafael (add your surname so they can trace your booking). I have a [STRIKE]2 days[/STRIKE] reservation for two nights [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] from 18th October 2017.

[STRIKE]I'm wondering if I receive[/STRIKE] If I have a parcel sent to the hotel about 3 days before my [STRIKE]arriving[/STRIKE] arrival, could you hold it [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for me until [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] I check in?

[STRIKE]Is[/STRIKE] Please let me know if it is possible.
Thank you.

[STRIKE]Br,[/STRIKE]
Rafael


Is this correct?
[STRIKE]Could[/STRIKE] Will the hotel understand my request?

Thanks. [STRIKE];)[/STRIKE]

See above.
 

tedmc

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Can you do me a favour by taking delivery of a parcel and keeping it three days before I arrive to stay at your hotel on the 18 October?
 
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