I’m neither rich ...

[Odessa Dawn]

1- I’m neither rich nor do I at a higher pay grade nor do I have (personal relationships/good connections?) nor am I successful nor am I educated but I’m good at suffering.

2- I’m neither rich, nor do I at a higher pay grade, nor do I have (personal relationships/good connections?), nor am I successful, nor am I educated, but I’m good at suffering.

3- I’m neither rich, at a higher pay grade/higher in rank, have (personal relationships/good connections?), successful, nor educated, but I’m good at suffering.

4- I’m neither rich, at a higher pay grade/higher in rank, have (personal relationships/good connections?), successful, nor educated. But I’m good at suffering.



I really need some help with those sentences. Would you help?

 

[Rover_KE]

What sort of help do you want? Where did you find them? Did you write them yourself?

 

[Odessa Dawn]

Which one is grammatical and natural, please? Yes, I wrote them myself.

 

[GoesStation]

None of them are natural. Try breaking them up into several sentences.

 

[Odessa Dawn]

I’m neither rich, nor at a higher pay grade/higher in rank. I’m not successful, nor educated. But I’m good at suffering.

I’m neither rich, at a higher pay grade/higher in rank, nor successful. I’m not highly educated/well qualified. But I’m good at suffering.

Please check.

 

[GoesStation]

I’m neither rich (no comma) nor [STRIKE]at a higher pay grade/[/STRIKE]higher in rank. I’m not successful[STRIKE], nor[/STRIKE]​ (no comma) or educated. But I’m good at suffering.

I’m neither rich, [STRIKE]at a higher pay grade/[/STRIKE]higher in rank, nor successful. I’m not highly educated/well qualified. But I’m good at suffering.

See above. Use nor only in a phrase that begins with neither (though there are some exceptions).