I am fond of children.

ambitious-girl

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Could you please check the sentences below?

I am fond of children. I find them loving, innocent and pure. Now, I would love to talk about my best friend’s baby girl, whose name is Selena. When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick her baby what name I liked. I was looking for a meaningful name for one month. Then finally I decided to choose that name.
 

emsr2d2

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Could you please check the sentences below?

I am fond of children. I find them loving, innocent and pure. Now, I would love to talk about my best friend’s baby girl, whose name is Selena. When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick [STRIKE]her baby what name I liked[/STRIKE] my favourite name. I [STRIKE]was looking for[/STRIKE] thought about a meaningful name for [STRIKE]one[/STRIKE] a month. [STRIKE]Then[/STRIKE] Finally, I decided to choose "Selena". [STRIKE]that name.[/STRIKE]

See above.
 

yi-ing

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Are these two sentence OK as well?
When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick a baby’s name I liked.
When my friend was pregnant, she asked me to pick a baby’s name which was my favourite.
 
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