I enjoyed the flexibility that freelancing offered and it was a valuable learning experience

Zoli

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Hello. Did I spell everything correctly?

I enjoyed the flexibility that freelancing offered and it was a valuable learning experience but it was challenging to maintain a consistent income because of the unpredictable nature of the projects, which made it difficult to plan for the future. I am excited to apply for this position because I would love to be part of a team.

I would be grateful for any suggestion.
 

jutfrank

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Everything is spelt correctly.

You have a nice natural English and a high level. What specific feedback are you really seeking in this case? What specific feedback to your writing helps you the most?
 

tedmc

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I find the first sentence too long. How about this:

I enjoyed the flexibility that freelancing offered and it was a valuable learning experience but it was challenging to maintain a consistent income. because of The unpredictable nature of the projects which made it difficult to plan for the future. I am excited to apply for this position because I would love to be to work as part of a team.
 
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