i"m sorry for the pain i coused to you.

[dahoud]

hi,

Please, correct my sentence from any wrong.

" I"m sorry for the pain i caused to you "

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi.

Please (no comma here) correct any errors in my sentence. [strike]from any wrong.[/strike]

"I'm sorry for the pain I caused [strike]to[/strike] you."

See above.

You must start every sentence with a capital letter, end every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark and always capitalise the word "I". We don't use "to" after "cause" in this construction.

In addition, do not put a space after opening quotation marks or before closing quotation marks.

 

[dahoud]

Awesome , thanks.

If I asked you to re-write my sentence in other way, how would you do it?

 

[emsr2d2]

Awesome, thanks.

If I asked you to re-write my sentence in other way, how would you do it?

Don't put a space before a comma.

If you asked me to rewrite your sentence, I would ask you "Why?" Regardless of your answer, I would ask you to rewrite your own sentence and we will comment on your attempt.

 

[dahoud]

Okay,I will try, i'm looking for better and sharper sentence with more feeling in it.

"I'm sorry for all the pain you went throw because of me."

What do you think?

 

[emsr2d2]

Okay, (space required after a comma) I will try. I'm looking for a better and sharper sentence with more feeling in it.

"I'm sorry for all the pain you went [strike]throw[/strike] through because of me."

What do you think?

With the correct spelling of "through", your sentence is fine. I don't think it's better or sharper than your original. In fact, your original is better. It's short and to the point and says everything it needs to.

 

[Tdol]

The first is more direct and takes more responsibility for causing the pain; I think it's a better apology.