Silverobama
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Hi.
I wrote a paragraph about something happened in my city recently.
I was deeply affected by a 61-year-old man who saved a drowning young woman when he was walking by a river in the nearby ancient town of Zhongshan. He was later found out to a recent British dipliomat to Chongqing. The Chongqing government will award him 50,000 yuan but he had decided to donate the money to charity.
An article about his story.
I used "affected" to mean "touched". I used "touched" and "moved" many times. Please help me with the paragraph.
I wrote a paragraph about something happened in my city recently.
I was deeply affected by a 61-year-old man who saved a drowning young woman when he was walking by a river in the nearby ancient town of Zhongshan. He was later found out to a recent British dipliomat to Chongqing. The Chongqing government will award him 50,000 yuan but he had decided to donate the money to charity.
An article about his story.
I used "affected" to mean "touched". I used "touched" and "moved" many times. Please help me with the paragraph.