amitbinu51
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- Oct 20, 2013
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- Malayalam
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Hi,
I really need help to improve my macbeth essay. I wrote one essay and i got :
61% for communication ( spellings and grammars)
40% for application (quotes)
45% thinking ( ideas)
55% knowledge
My teacher also gave me a comment that she needs ideas not facts. so please help me how to find with at least one example.
My macbeth, by william shakespeare , topic was "Explain why lady macbeth is responsible for macbeth's tagic downfall".
Also help me how to write a fully defined thesis statement that can be connected to 3 ideas for this essay...
I really need help to improve my macbeth essay. I wrote one essay and i got :
61% for communication ( spellings and grammars)
40% for application (quotes)
45% thinking ( ideas)
55% knowledge
My teacher also gave me a comment that she needs ideas not facts. so please help me how to find with at least one example.
My macbeth, by william shakespeare , topic was "Explain why lady macbeth is responsible for macbeth's tagic downfall".
Also help me how to write a fully defined thesis statement that can be connected to 3 ideas for this essay...