DenisRu
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- Joined
- Sep 5, 2018
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- Student or Learner
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- Russian
- Home Country
- Germany
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- Germany
Hey guys,
Im new on "usingenglish.com" but I'm glad i have found a forum like "usingenglish.com".
It's like five years ago, I wrote an essay in school, as a result i have to struggle with writing an essay. I would be really happy, if someone has got some time and pleasure to read my essay and give me some ideas. I personally thing, my biggest problem is the sentence structure!?!?! I know how to build a sentence but when the sentence become more complicated I start to struggle.
This is not my homework. I really want to improve my english and in my opinion, the best way to learn just by DOING. I would be an asset , if somebody could check my writing skills.
As computers are being used more an more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
In the 21 century, computers play a bigger and bigger role in education. Nowadays every classroom has got a computer thus replace the teacher.
In today's world, the computer became more and more important in our life. They can do million of thing but I totally disagree with the argument that computers can replace the role of a teacher. Furthermore, a teacher adduce youth discipline and manners.
At the present day, we use computers in every situation. To give an example; we use it in school for a research on a topic. Earlier people have to went to the library and read several of books for a research on a topic. In fact, students can save a lot of time. Therefore it is helpful to contribute a computer in every classroom.
Indeed, the computer has no feelings and it is not smart enough to teach students discipline and manners. Teachers has an important impact on youth. Accordingly, teachers teach students manners for their future life. Moreover, students need somebody to talk or discuss. As an example, when a student does not agree with the answer the computer gave, he wants to discuss this answer with the teacher or maybe he has got some issues in life and wants to talk to someone expect the parents.
In conclusion, the computer has a lot of benefits but in my opinion, it will never replace the role of a teacher. Moreover, I think they should never try to replace the role of a teacher. In fact, they can not feel like a teacher also every student is an individual an has to handle like one.
Im new on "usingenglish.com" but I'm glad i have found a forum like "usingenglish.com".
It's like five years ago, I wrote an essay in school, as a result i have to struggle with writing an essay. I would be really happy, if someone has got some time and pleasure to read my essay and give me some ideas. I personally thing, my biggest problem is the sentence structure!?!?! I know how to build a sentence but when the sentence become more complicated I start to struggle.
This is not my homework. I really want to improve my english and in my opinion, the best way to learn just by DOING. I would be an asset , if somebody could check my writing skills.
As computers are being used more an more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
In the 21 century, computers play a bigger and bigger role in education. Nowadays every classroom has got a computer thus replace the teacher.
In today's world, the computer became more and more important in our life. They can do million of thing but I totally disagree with the argument that computers can replace the role of a teacher. Furthermore, a teacher adduce youth discipline and manners.
At the present day, we use computers in every situation. To give an example; we use it in school for a research on a topic. Earlier people have to went to the library and read several of books for a research on a topic. In fact, students can save a lot of time. Therefore it is helpful to contribute a computer in every classroom.
Indeed, the computer has no feelings and it is not smart enough to teach students discipline and manners. Teachers has an important impact on youth. Accordingly, teachers teach students manners for their future life. Moreover, students need somebody to talk or discuss. As an example, when a student does not agree with the answer the computer gave, he wants to discuss this answer with the teacher or maybe he has got some issues in life and wants to talk to someone expect the parents.
In conclusion, the computer has a lot of benefits but in my opinion, it will never replace the role of a teacher. Moreover, I think they should never try to replace the role of a teacher. In fact, they can not feel like a teacher also every student is an individual an has to handle like one.
