In the capital city, the cold days seemed to fade away

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"In the capital city, the cold days seemed to fade away to the hot summer days, although the clouds were still visible in the morning."

Thanks.


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[Tarheel]

It's OK, but you can do better.

 

[Lycidas]

"In the capital city, the cold days seemed to fade away to the hot summer days, although the clouds were still visible in the morning."

I like how you have used a comma before the sentence-ending "although"-clause.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello. Unnecessary. Just go straight in with your question.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct? (I wrote the text.)

"In the capital city, the cold days seemed to fade away to the hot summer days, although the clouds were still visible in the morning."

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