roman.ryson
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- Jul 5, 2016
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- Russian
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- Ukraine
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- Ukraine
Hi, I’m just joined this forum, and hope I’m writing in appropriate sub-forum.
I have a question about one expression in my motivation letter to the university:
“…During last year of work I noticed insufficient amount of international knowledge for my career development. As my job was connected with markets of foreign countries, I felt that I needed deeper understanding of international business culture, principles of a trading in a global market, international communication.”
I feel that expression insufficient amount is incorrect in this case, but I do not like everything I can create instead it.
Any ideas?
Thanks
I have a question about one expression in my motivation letter to the university:
“…During last year of work I noticed insufficient amount of international knowledge for my career development. As my job was connected with markets of foreign countries, I felt that I needed deeper understanding of international business culture, principles of a trading in a global market, international communication.”
I feel that expression insufficient amount is incorrect in this case, but I do not like everything I can create instead it.
Any ideas?
Thanks