[Grammar] Introduction about myself on interview

[Benr]

My name is Ben and i was born in Georgetown. Currently i am working at Philips as Reliability Engineer and i have 4 years experience in this field.
My main job responsibility is to take care reliability request and liaise with customer to resolve reliability issues.
I work closely with R&D team for new product introduction where i have to prepare test plans based on standards test procedures.
Apart of that i also will tell the team if i have concern on their test requirements by not doing the redundant test.

 

[bhaisahab]

My name is Ben and i was born in Georgetown. Currently i am working at Philips as Reliability Engineer and i have 4 years experience in this field.
My main job responsibility is to take care reliability request and liaise with customer to resolve reliability issues.
I work closely with R&D team for new product introduction where i have to prepare test plans based on standards test procedures.
Apart of that i also will tell the team if i have concern on their test requirements by not doing the redundant test.

Please give correct information in your profile.

 

[Benr]

Please help me to understand on how to give correct information. Please give some examples for me to give a good introduction without grammar mistakes.

Thank You.