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*Each student in our school is closely monitored by class teacher.

* Anybody who wants, students,parents and teachers, can benefit from our Service from psychological, academic, familial and social aspects.
*Students are directed by carrying out some tests and interviews, by identifying their problems and wishes, learning patterns and causes of failure, study habits, social development,their personality and development, academic skills, professional characteristics, interests, and abilities.
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*Each student in our school is closely monitored by a class teacher.

* [STRIKE]Anybody who wants,[/STRIKE] Students,parents and teachers, can benefit from our service, from psychological, academic, familial and social aspects.
[FONT=&quot]*Students are directed by carrying out some tests and interviews, including consideration of:[/FONT]

• [FONT=&quot][STRIKE][FONT=&quot]their[/STRIKE] problems and wishes, [/FONT][/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot]learning patterns and causes of failure, [/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot]study habits, [/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot]social development,[/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot][STRIKE]their[/STRIKE] personality and development, [/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot]academic skills, [/FONT]
• [FONT=&quot]professional characteristics, interests, and abilities.
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Students are directed by carrying out some tests and interviews, including consideration of:

Students are assessed by undergoing some tests and interviews on the following aspects before they are given advice or directions.

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