Is this Speech Analyses good ?

[Tiny333]

Hi . Can someone perhaps read through my Speech Analyses and see if it is correct and meets the requirements of the task? Thank you very much. The appendix contains the speech that should be analyzed and my analysis. That is the task: Analyze the structure of the Speech and the Speaker's use of language; stylistic devices , line of argument ect. and interpret the message Obama wishes to convey. ( I would be happy to be told what I should improve.) Best regards

 

[5jj]

Is this a homework assignment?

 

[emsr2d2]

Hi. no full stop here

Can someone perhaps read through my speech analysis and see if it is correct and meets the requirements of the task? Thank you very much. The appendix contains the speech that should be analyzed and my analysis.

That This is the task: Analyze the structure of the speech and the speaker's use of language, stylistic devices, line of argument ect. etc and interpret the message Obama wishes to convey.

(I would be happy to be told what I should improve.)

Best regards.

While we wait for your answer to 5jj's question, please note my changes above.

If you must use an emoji, put it after the closing punctuation mark of the preceding sentence.
You incorrectly capitalised four words. I'm aware that common nouns are capitalised in German but that's not the case in English.
When you introduce something (in this case "the task"), use "This" before it. If you had written the task instruction first, you could have followed it with "That".
The abbreviation of "et cetera" is "etc", not "ect".
Don't put a space after an opening bracket.
End every sentence, no matter how short, with an appropriate closing punctuation mark.

 

[Tiny333]

Is this a homework assignment?

We are going to write a exam ( speech analysis) and this was an exercise for the exam…

 

[Tiny333]

While we wait for your answer to 5jj's question, please note my changes above.

If you must use an emoji, put it after the closing punctuation mark of the preceding sentence.
You incorrectly capitalised four words. I'm aware that common nouns are capitalised in German but that's not the case in English.
When you introduce something (in this case "the task"), use "This" before it. If you had written the task instruction first, you could have followed it with "That".
The abbreviation of "et cetera" is "etc", not "ect".
Don't put a space after an opening bracket.
End every sentence, no matter how short, with an appropriate closing punctuation mark.

Thank you very much for correcting my sentences! This is really helpful to improve my English.

 

[emsr2d2]

We are going to write take an exam (speech analysis) and this was an exercise for the exam.

Note my corrections above. One of the corrections you thanked me for was "Don't put a space after an opening bracket" but you did it again in this post. Please make sure you're actually taking note of our advice.