z7655431
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As an EFL learner, I always think the conjunction "while" is used to link two contrasting ideas. And in many cases, we can use "though" or "although" to replace it.
For example:
While I don't agree, I understand their point of view.
While Ivan is very sociable, his brother is more reserved.
However, there's something very confusing in this news article. Here's the link: https://www.bbc.co.uk/newsround/articles/c0mv8zjmw2ro
It says "While we don't condone the wreaths... and Santa hats, let's stay away from adhesives, graffiti and all things that can damage the art."
I find this wording confusing. Earlier in the article, it says:
"In the past other decorations like Santa hats and wreaths have been added but this was different."
This sounds like the council tolerated or at least accepted those past decorations. But then the post says "we don’t condone the wreaths and Santa hats". Isn’t that contradictory?
I would write it as
"While we condone the wreaths... and Santa hats, let's stay away from adhesives, graffiti and all things that can damage the art." -- This sounds correct to my EFL ears.
What do you think of this?
For example:
While I don't agree, I understand their point of view.
While Ivan is very sociable, his brother is more reserved.
However, there's something very confusing in this news article. Here's the link: https://www.bbc.co.uk/newsround/articles/c0mv8zjmw2ro
It says "While we don't condone the wreaths... and Santa hats, let's stay away from adhesives, graffiti and all things that can damage the art."
I find this wording confusing. Earlier in the article, it says:
"In the past other decorations like Santa hats and wreaths have been added but this was different."
This sounds like the council tolerated or at least accepted those past decorations. But then the post says "we don’t condone the wreaths and Santa hats". Isn’t that contradictory?
I would write it as
"While we condone the wreaths... and Santa hats, let's stay away from adhesives, graffiti and all things that can damage the art." -- This sounds correct to my EFL ears.
What do you think of this?