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Try the above.Hi, everyone. I'm describing the fifth step. please help me with the bold parts.
The purified juice is boiled in an evaporator [STRIKE]to remove water so that it can be/it is?[/STRIKE] and concentrated into [STRIKE]the?[/STRIKE] syrup.
Thanks, but I have already used a lot of 'and'. Besides, I think here I need to express purpose. That's why I used 'so that'. And I'm having trouble writing 150 words. That's why I added 'to remove water'.
Thanks, but why 'a syrup'. The dictionary says 'syrup' is an uncountable noun.In that case you can use:
The purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water so that it can be concentrated into a syrup.
Sorry, I didn't see his response.Liquid, like vapor or gas, can be either countable or non-coubtable. I don't think I can improve on the thorough answer provided by slevlife. Is there some specific part of that explanation that is bothering you?
The purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, which concentrates it into syrup
Does 'which' refer to the entire first clause?
I think 'it' is confusing. It might refer to the closest noun 'water'. Could you explain?
Perhaps, repeating the juice would be better?
The purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, which concentrates the juice into a syrup.
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