It would be appropriate if I take up the work ...

[MeyaN]

"It would be appropriate if I take up the work rather than he takes up the work."

"It would be appropriate if I took up the work rather than you took up the work."

Please correct the above sentences and give any suggestions/explanations.

Thank you.

 

[Tdol]

I'd use something like:

It would be appropriate if I took up the work rather than that you took up the work.

 

[GoesStation]

Can you re-write the sentence in a completely different form? Take up the work is needlessly verbose.

 

[Matthew Wai]

Please correct the above sentences and give any suggestions/explanations.

I suggest you see below.

- End each sentence with the appropriate punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).

 

[MeyaN]

Inserted them now. Thank you.

 

[Matthew Wai]

It would be appropriate for me rather than you to do the work.

Inserted them now. Thank you.

The full stop should be before the closing quotation mark.

 

[MeyaN]

Done. Thank you. Please answer it.