alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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John decided to spend a week in the village. He rented a cottage on a verdant hill. Looking out the window, he took in the scenery. Soaring, jagged mountain peaks mingled with azure, cloudless skies, cast with a golden gleam by a friendly sun. The scent of lemon blossoms rode on mild breezes that refreshed the hills. A few starlings flapped leisurely across the sky. The world outside the cottage mirrored John's inner feelings. He was at peace with the world, and more importantly, felt at peace with himself.
John decided to spend a week in the village. He rented a cottage on a verdant hill. Looking out the window, he took in the scenery. Soaring, jagged mountain peaks mingled with azure, cloudless skies, cast with a golden gleam by a friendly sun. The scent of lemon blossoms rode on mild breezes that refreshed the hills. A few starlings flapped leisurely across the sky. The world outside the cottage mirrored John's inner feelings. He was at peace with the world, and more importantly, felt at peace with himself.
