Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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John lived a normal life until the death of his parents, but with their departure, everything changed. He started drinking and came to work late, which in the end led to him losing his job. He mortgaged his flat to open a restaurant, but when it closed down, he even lost his home. People who knew him before, couldn't believe their eyes when they saw him at the entrance of a mall. A dishevelled, smelly man with a large stomach asked them for some spare change. He was gloomy, but when someone recognised him and called his name, his grey eyes would liven up as if waking up from a dream.
John lived a normal life until the death of his parents, but with their departure, everything changed. He started drinking and came to work late, which in the end led to him losing his job. He mortgaged his flat to open a restaurant, but when it closed down, he even lost his home. People who knew him before, couldn't believe their eyes when they saw him at the entrance of a mall. A dishevelled, smelly man with a large stomach asked them for some spare change. He was gloomy, but when someone recognised him and called his name, his grey eyes would liven up as if waking up from a dream.