Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following dialogues grammatically correct?
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-"Kelly, I need to jump. You can stay here and wait for me, because I remember you have knock knees.", Kevin said.
-"Seriously? I will jump too. I thought that you knew my answer after having been obsessed with me for so long. One again you you disappoint me.", Kelly replied.
-"Yes, you are right. But you are stubborn and sometimes in a bad mood."
-"Oh, really? Why you are saying that I am stubborn?"
Before Kelly's hard look, Kevin preferred to remain silent.
They walked to the energy source. Kevin began to recite a poem that he wrote years ago inspired by Kelly.
"I think in you and I wonder.
An infinity of questions come to my mind.
Which answer is a reliable answer?
I look at you, I observe you carefully, My soul and my mind join together to answer me in some way.
In you, I see a tender, sweet and passionate woman.
Branded by the fire of the harshness of life. Forming a shield, an impenetrable castle
But I always knew that behind all this…
There was an unimaginable woman."
-"It was a nice poem , but don't flatter yourself! But it was nice to know that side of you. I remember you sent that poem with flowers to the my place of work.", Kelly replied,.
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Thanks.
Are the following dialogues grammatically correct?
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-"Kelly, I need to jump. You can stay here and wait for me, because I remember you have knock knees.", Kevin said.
-"Seriously? I will jump too. I thought that you knew my answer after having been obsessed with me for so long. One again you you disappoint me.", Kelly replied.
-"Yes, you are right. But you are stubborn and sometimes in a bad mood."
-"Oh, really? Why you are saying that I am stubborn?"
Before Kelly's hard look, Kevin preferred to remain silent.
They walked to the energy source. Kevin began to recite a poem that he wrote years ago inspired by Kelly.
"I think in you and I wonder.
An infinity of questions come to my mind.
Which answer is a reliable answer?
I look at you, I observe you carefully, My soul and my mind join together to answer me in some way.
In you, I see a tender, sweet and passionate woman.
Branded by the fire of the harshness of life. Forming a shield, an impenetrable castle
But I always knew that behind all this…
There was an unimaginable woman."
-"It was a nice poem , but don't flatter yourself! But it was nice to know that side of you. I remember you sent that poem with flowers to the my place of work.", Kelly replied,.
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Thanks.