Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Kevin got totally dirty on the stage after Cheryl dumped fish-head, yogurt and other things on Kevin`s head. Kelly, who would act as the romantic interest of Kevin in the play, began to laugh nervously and left the stage talking to Trish and Brittany. Kevin observed that the whole school laughed at him. He left the stage and the theater very upset.
After a while that Kevin walking away of the theater, he threw the special stone, which he found near his home, against a wall. A hobo approached to him and tried to spoke to him."
Thanks.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Kevin got totally dirty on the stage after Cheryl dumped fish-head, yogurt and other things on Kevin`s head. Kelly, who would act as the romantic interest of Kevin in the play, began to laugh nervously and left the stage talking to Trish and Brittany. Kevin observed that the whole school laughed at him. He left the stage and the theater very upset.
After a while that Kevin walking away of the theater, he threw the special stone, which he found near his home, against a wall. A hobo approached to him and tried to spoke to him."
Thanks.