Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Kevin sat across the street of the building. He was writing down some ideas in his copybook. Suddenly we woke up and put on his backpack, and walking in direction to the abandoned warehouses near the port of the city. Once inside there, he dressed for his ritual. First he put his old white sports pant and his black espadrilles. Then he put a white t-shirt and finally, he put a kind of chatin like the ancient greeks. Kevin puts play in his old radio and a few seconds later, instrumental music began."
Thanks.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"Kevin sat across the street of the building. He was writing down some ideas in his copybook. Suddenly we woke up and put on his backpack, and walking in direction to the abandoned warehouses near the port of the city. Once inside there, he dressed for his ritual. First he put his old white sports pant and his black espadrilles. Then he put a white t-shirt and finally, he put a kind of chatin like the ancient greeks. Kevin puts play in his old radio and a few seconds later, instrumental music began."
Thanks.