alpacinou
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Is this correct and natural?
Later that night we went to a restaurant along the banks of the Thames. The London night was pleasantly cool. A soft breeze drifted up from the Thames to stroke our faces. The dinner was tender and the wine was as smooth as the flow of Thames.
I'm specifically concerned about the last sentence.
Later that night we went to a restaurant along the banks of the Thames. The London night was pleasantly cool. A soft breeze drifted up from the Thames to stroke our faces. The dinner was tender and the wine was as smooth as the flow of Thames.
I'm specifically concerned about the last sentence.
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