Life seldom met Peter's expectations

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Bassim

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Life seldom met Peter's expectations. On one side there were his plans, goals and dreams, and on the other the harsh reality, which didn't care about someone's feelings and suffering. Peter often felt like a puppet on a string, unable to fight invisible powers that held his life in their hands. He was not religious, but the longer he lived the more he was convinced that his destiny was somehow preordained. He was like a fish in an aquarium. He would swim in a few litres of water, but never feel the waves of a river or the sea.
 

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You have not!

I might quibble about a few commas you could put in. But I shall not. Well done!
 
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