alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Mary flicked off the lights and sank into her bed. She tossed and tuned. Here we go again. She'd been unable to cross the border between sleep and wakefulness. She woke to the sound of her three-year-old son screaming in the depths of the night. Getting up, she sat on the bed with her legs curled beneath her and buried her face in her hands, sighing deeply. It's gonna be another long night. I should've used contraceptives. Her stomach churned as George's screams tore the silence of the night. What do you want now? Stumbling to his cradle, she lifted him and sniffed. The stench of his diapers stung her nose and she recoiled from her son like a cat disgusted by rotten food. Putting George back in his crib, Mary sprawled out on her bed. She felt like her son was draining what was left of her youth, her vigor. It's his son too. Where is he now? Gambling another night away with his important buddies?
Mary flicked off the lights and sank into her bed. She tossed and tuned. Here we go again. She'd been unable to cross the border between sleep and wakefulness. She woke to the sound of her three-year-old son screaming in the depths of the night. Getting up, she sat on the bed with her legs curled beneath her and buried her face in her hands, sighing deeply. It's gonna be another long night. I should've used contraceptives. Her stomach churned as George's screams tore the silence of the night. What do you want now? Stumbling to his cradle, she lifted him and sniffed. The stench of his diapers stung her nose and she recoiled from her son like a cat disgusted by rotten food. Putting George back in his crib, Mary sprawled out on her bed. She felt like her son was draining what was left of her youth, her vigor. It's his son too. Where is he now? Gambling another night away with his important buddies?