alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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Maxim took a deep breath and trudged closer to the battle zone. He squatted down and covered his head as the staccato chattering of machine-guns got louder. Taking cover behind a neck-high concrete wall riddled with bullet holes, he occasionally rose to see what was happening. Tracer bullets pierced the dark, lighting the night like shooting stars. A thunder punctured the night as the bullets stretched the air. For a moment, Maxim thought about how hos journey as a journalist had brought him to this ugly feast of human flesh and blood.
Maxim took a deep breath and trudged closer to the battle zone. He squatted down and covered his head as the staccato chattering of machine-guns got louder. Taking cover behind a neck-high concrete wall riddled with bullet holes, he occasionally rose to see what was happening. Tracer bullets pierced the dark, lighting the night like shooting stars. A thunder punctured the night as the bullets stretched the air. For a moment, Maxim thought about how hos journey as a journalist had brought him to this ugly feast of human flesh and blood.