Missing item

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bluevee

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Please help me make corrections below and more polite mail regarding a missing item.

hello chinwe,
i would like to inform you that the house keeeper in charge of your room complained of not finding the towel and duvet in your former apartment E114.
And she would like to find out if your remaining items is not needed anylonger
regards,
Vivian.
 
Hello Chinwe,

[STRIKE]i would like to inform you that[/STRIKE]
The housekeeeper in charge of your room has complained [STRIKE]of not finding[/STRIKE] that he/she could not find the towel and duvet in your former apartment Unit E114.
And she would like to find out if [STRIKE]your remaining items[/STRIKE] the items you have left behind [STRIKE]is [/STRIKE] are not needed any longer.

Regards,
Vivian

A note like this does not need to be formal.

not a teacher
 
How could items that could not be found be items that were left behind?
 
How could items that could not be found be items that were left behind?

Only the towel and duvet could not be found. There are other items left behind.
 
Dear Chinwe

I am writing to let you know that when the housekeeper checked your apartment (E114), she discovered that the duvet and the towel were missing. Also, she found some items (here you should list the items) you had left behind.

Please tell us if you know the whereabouts of the duvet and the towel, and whether you still need the items you left behind.

Regards.

Vivian
 
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