As 5jj said, we don't do your work for you. In addition, please see my amendments to your post. If you are going to use this forum, you need to remember the following rules of written English:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
- Use normal, standard English words ("pleaaaaaaaase" is not a word).