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Could you please check this sentence?

Music has sure found its way into our lives and has become an inseparable part of our it.
Listening to music, especially soothing music can be an extremely powerful tool to help you get rid of all the unnecessary stress in your daily life. It helps your mind calm down and drags your attention away from all the negative thoughts that tag along with stress.
 
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newkeenlearner said:
Could you please check [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these sentence​s?

Music has [STRIKE]sure[/STRIKE] found its way into our lives and has become an inseparable part of [STRIKE]our[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] them.
Listening to music, especially soothing music, can be an extremely powerful tool to help you get rid of all the unnecessary stress in your daily life. It helps your mind calm down and drags your attention away from all the negative thoughts that [STRIKE]tag[/STRIKE] go along with stress.
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