[Grammar] My brother

[samadkaladi]

My favourite personality is my elder brother his name is Safdar Hussain. He is 17 years old and he has just completed his matriculation his aimbution is to be a CSSPIS. He always wants to avail others. He is soft hearted boy. Every one imbue from his personality he do his study on time he is extra ordinary boy and hand some too.
He always respect others he works day and night for his destine. His very good nature. He loves me a lot. It all about my modest brother.

 

[emsr2d2]

The word "personality" in BrE usually means someone who is well known or even famous. They might be a "TV personality" or similar. I assume you just mean that your brother is your favourite person.

 

[samadkaladi]

If any one help and correct the grammar. I am still a waiting.

 

[emsr2d2]

[STRIKE]If[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]any one[/STRIKE] I am still waiting for someone to help and correct the grammar. [STRIKE]I am still a waiting.[/STRIKE]

I made a start in post #2. Perhaps you could click on "Like" or "Thank" to show that you read post #2 and you understood my comment.

 

[samadkaladi]

Thanks for Reply "Emsr2d2".

I am still waiting for someone to help and correct the grammar.
[h=2]"My brother" post on dated 11-Aug-2016[/h]