Need help editing appeal letter

Yueehs

Junior Member
Joined
May 2, 2020
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Student or Learner
Native Language
Malay
Home Country
Malaysia
Current Location
Singapore
Hi.
Appreciate someone can help by editing my appeal letter.


Ramli is one of our most valuable worker and he has been working for us since July 2014. The fact that he is color blind doesn’t affect his job performance or safety because his job doesn’t require him to identify color.
For the past few months 4 experience workers has left us due to the prolonged movement restriction on dormitory resident. In this pandemic times our business revenue has gone downward. It is imperative to keep our experience worker by our side to get through this difficult times.

We wish you could accept our appeal and renew this worker work permit. Thank you.
 

teechar

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Staff member
Joined
Feb 18, 2015
Member Type
English Teacher
Native Language
English
Home Country
Iraq
Current Location
Iraq
Hi.
I would appreciate it if someone could/can help [STRIKE]by editing[/STRIKE] proofread and edit my appeal letter.

Ramli is one of our most valuable workers, and he has been working for us since July 2014. The fact that he is color blind doesn’t affect his job performance or safety because his job doesn’t require him to identify color.
[STRIKE]For[/STRIKE] Over the past few months, four experienced workers [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] have left us due to the prolonged movement restriction on dormitory residents. [STRIKE]In this[/STRIKE] Due to the pandemic, [STRIKE]times[/STRIKE] our business revenue has gone down. [STRIKE]ward.[/STRIKE] It is, therefore, imperative for us to retain [STRIKE]keep[/STRIKE] our experienced workers [STRIKE]by our side[/STRIKE] to get through [STRIKE]this[/STRIKE] these difficult times.

We [STRIKE]wish[/STRIKE] hope and trust that you [STRIKE]could[/STRIKE] will accept our appeal and renew this worker's work permit. Thank you.
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